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Replacing To Be Verbs

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I am. You are. She is. Obviously, being is essential to existence, so it’s no surprise that to be verbs are essential in writing. It is nearly impossible to write without using an occasional are or is.  

The table below shows the different forms of the verb to be in several common tenses. These examples illustrate how the verb changes depending on the subject and the time of the action.

Tense Forms of To Be
Present I am
He/She/It is
You/We/They are
Past I was
He/She/It was
You/We/They were
Perfect I have been / had been
He/She/It has been / had been
You/We/They have been / had been
Progressive I am being / was being
He/She/It is being / was being
You/We/They are being / were being
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However, most of us rely too heavily on to be verbs or use them unconsciously. To be verbs lack the vigor and power offered by stronger, more-action packed verbs. As a result, our writing suffers. 

Try the techniques below to invigorate your prose.

1. Replace to be Verbs with Stronger, More Specific Verbs

Choose verbs that show exactly what the subject is doing instead of simply describing its state.

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My sister is loud when she is telling her children to do their homework. My sister bellows when telling her children to do their homework.
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Sometimes, this requires changing the word order in a sentence:

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The restaurant’s food is excellent. The restaurant serves excellent food.
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2. Turn Nouns into Verbs

Many sentences become shorter and stronger by changing a noun into an action verb.

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Jennifer Lawrence is the star of The Hunger Games. Jennifer Lawrence stars in The Hunger Games.
Our mother was the driver of the bus. Our mother drove the bus.
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3. Combine Short, Choppy Sentences

Combining related ideas often removes unnecessary to be verbs while improving the flow of your writing.

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The food at the restaurant is excellent. The hamburgers are juicy. The onion rings are crispy. The pie is the best I have ever eaten. The restaurant serves excellent food, including juicy hamburgers, crispy onion rings and the best pie I have ever eaten.
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4. Avoid Overusing "There Is," "There Are" and Similar Expressions

Phrases such as there is, there are, there were and it is often delay the main idea. Revising these sentences helps emphasize the subject and eliminate unnecessary words.

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The restaurant's parking lot is narrow. There are not very many parking spaces and those that are available are too cramped. The restaurant suffers from a narrow parking lot with only a few cramped spaces.
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In the example above, we not only combined sentences to eliminate to be verbs, but we also eliminated there are and that are. Such expressions delay or minimize the subject and add needless words. In the revisions below, we rearranged the sentences to emphasize the subjects, choose bolder verbs, and cut needless words.

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It is my intention to transfer to a four-year university. I intend to transfer to a four-year university.
There were some important findings resulting from this experiment. This experiment resulted in some important findings.
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Sometimes, you can cut unnecessary words with no other changes:

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He struggled with the paper that was assigned by the professor. He struggled with the paper assigned by the professor.
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5. Replace a To Be Verb and a Prepositional Phrase with a Strong Verb

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Electric car technology was in existence as early as 1830. Electric car technology existed as early as 1830.
Negative advertising is influential on voters' perceptions of candidates. Negative advertising influences voters' perceptions of candidates.
I am in receipt of your letter. I have received your letter./I received your letter.
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6. Replace a To Be Verb and an -ing Verb with a Simple Verb

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The stock market was fluctuating wildly before the crash. The stock market fluctuated wildly before the crash.
The concept of immortality is intriguing to me. The concept of immortality intrigues me.
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